Once upon a time 4th grade wrote realistic fiction stories. We had street races remarkably similar to Fast and Furious (your OWN story), shark attacks, snowboarding competitions, and tornadoes. You know, the usual stuff you'd expect for everyday life. One of my new students from Sierra Leone pours her heart and soul into her work. However sometimes you still need to work on the finer grammar points.
Don't worry. I kindly pointed out her error before she presented to the class. I look out for my kiddos.